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Thursday, May 16, 2013

Review: The Killing Times ~ Morgan Kelley (Blog Tour Stop)


The Killing Times ~ An FBI/Romance Thriller.
 

Thank you to everyone that has contacted me!
 
I hope you love the story behind Elizabeth, Ethan and Callen as much as I do.
 
The killing Times is the first book in the series, and starts the journey of Elizabeth LaRue and Ethan Blackhawk.
 
The two come together despite the odds, and find the one thing we all want and search for every day.
 
True love.
 
I hope you enjoy the journey!
Much love!
Morgan Kelley



Review by Tara Cross

 

In this book by Author Morgan Kelley, we are introduced to Elizabeth LaRue. She’s a fallen angel of the FBI, who has returned home after a life altering incident. Once home, she takes over the position of Sheriff that her father had once held until his death.

While in Salem, as sheriff there are a string of odd murders that pique her interest. Slowly as they unfold, Elizabeth finds out they stretch back to before her father’s death.

Salem has a killer.

The sleepy southern town is rocked to its core, that one of their own is killing women to mimic the Salem witch trials. Each method is different, but the same thing is common throughout. Someone is hell bent on taking lives and tormenting Elizabeth.

In comes the FBI, and sexy Special Agent Ethan Blackhawk. From the minute they meet, the sparks fly and the two become a hot and heavy romance. As their love progresses, the killer is more determined to kill the only person that can stop him.

Elizabeth.

Before the end of the book, everything in Elizabeth’s life is questioned, turned upside down and risked.

I really enjoyed this novel. It was an easy ready, but still made you wonder who the killer was until the end. The author peppered it with clues and pointed you in the right direction. She made it fun and enjoyable from the first page to the last.  This reminded me of a beach read. It was just under 400 pages and kept me interested the entire time.

The sex scenes were heartfelt, meaningful and steamy. By the end I wanted to change my name and be Elizabeth.

The mix of humor, entertainment and thriller were well balanced and you honestly started to believe that Elizabeth could be one of your girlfriends, with her quick wit, funny comebacks and genuine heart.

All in all, this was an excellent first book to kick off the series. There was just enough character development to make me want to continue the series.

 
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Bio

Morgan Kelley lives in the beautiful Pocono Mountains with her husband and two children.  After attending college at Penn State University and studying Criminal Justice, Morgan knew here only true passion in life would be murder and books.  She put them both together and began her career as a writer.  Other than books and writing, you can find Morgan hanging out in her garden and digging in the dirt.

Her other works include: The Junction, Serial Sins, The Killing Times (book 1), Sacred Burial Grounds (book 2), True Love Lost (book 3), Deep Dark Mire (book 4), Fire Burns hot (book 5) The Blood Betrayal, The Blood Redemption, The Blood Vengeance, and The Blood Retribution.


Upcoming Projects and Released Projects

FBI Stand Alones


The Junction

Serial Sins


The FBI Series







Darkness Of Truth ~ Out summer of 2013

Home Sweet Evil ~ Out for Halloween 2013

 

The Blood Series - Vampyres

 
The Blood Betrayal - Currently only available in paperback

The Blood Seduction ~ Christmas 2013

 

The Private Investigator Series

 
Stolen by Moonlight (1) out fall of 2013

 

The Croft & Croft Series
 


Vegas is Dying - Out fall 2013 

 

Please feel free to visit Morgan at her website: www.morgankelley.com,  drop her an email at author.m.kelley@gmail.com, or pop into her blog at www.morgankelley.blogspot.com.

 

 

Tuesday, May 14, 2013

An Author's Platform - Seven Ways to Build Your Repuation as Creative Writer - Guest Post from Writer's Relief

This is a reposting from Writer's Relief. Reprinted with Permission.



Seven Ways To Build Your Reputation As A Creative Writer
 
Posted on August 12, 2009 by Writer's Relief Staff
 
It’s easy to label yourself a writer. Jot down a poem and call yourself a scribe. But building a reputation for yourself as a writer is the evidence others need to label you a writer. Whether good or bad, writers’ reputations follow them wherever they go, either paving the way for success or putting up roadblocks in the path to getting published or developing a readership. It’s essential that creative writers take into consideration the way their peers, literary agents, editors, and readers view not only the quality of their writing, but their credentials and career path as well. It’s far easier to create a solid, professional reputation than to undo the damage of a spotty record and poor public persona.
 
Creative writers can brand themselves in any number of ways, and successful writers use more than one self-marketing method.
 
1. Take advantage of social-networking sites. Competition in the writing world is fierce, and when a creative writer wants to generate interest in a novel, it takes more than word of mouth. Attending writers’ conferences and writers’ groups have always been good ways to connect with others in the industry, and now writers can also take advantage of online social-networking sites such as Facebook, MySpace, and Twitter to create a buzz about their work by shaping connections nationwide—even worldwide—quickly and efficiently.
 
Facebook, for example, offers the opportunity to create both a personal profile and a “fan page”—a space where artists and writers can highlight their work. (Check out the Writer’s Relief Facebook page!) Writers can connect with readers by sharing news, writing samples, photos, and links.
MySpace also allows users to create extensive profiles, while Twitter is a simplified version of the two (check out our tweets about writing and publishing). Social networking online helps writers engage others in their work and melds well with more traditional marketing efforts like book reviews, book signings, and tours.
 
 
2. Join an association. If you are published, investigate joining a professional writing association, such as the Mystery Writers of America or the Horror Writers Association. It’s another opportunity to network, and belonging to an association of like-minded writers offers other benefits to your craft such as industry news, useful links, and discussion groups.
 
3. Create a Web presence. It’s important that someone doing an online search of your name is able to find a profile page that showcases you and your work. Many authors have websites in addition to user pages on social-networking sites to maximize their exposure. A profile page should feature your name, photo, and a brief biography. You can post your writing credentials, excerpts from your novel, poems and/or short stories, and favorable reviews. If you are a published author, your profile should link to a site where your books can be purchased. Be sure to use links to your profile at every opportunity—in email and forum signatures, on Facebook, MySpace, or other social-networking sites, and on business cards and stationery.
 
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4. Blog. It seems that everyone has a blog these days, but it is especially useful for writers to take advantage of this marketing strategy. Your entries are firsthand examples of your writing—so make them good and edit well—and this can generate interest in your other work. Update frequently and be creative in your blog; include helpful links, insights, even humor to keep readers interested. If you are published, make sure it’s easy for a reader to purchase your work with a handy link to Amazon.com, for example, and include links to any site that features your writing or reviews of your writing.
 
Another useful feature of blogging is that it is interactive and personal—readers can leave comments or suggestions, and you can respond to them directly. You can keep them informed of any book signings or works in progress and answer any questions. It’s best to update your blog as often as possible to keep it fresh and interesting. Be sure to use keywords in each post (title and text) to optimize search engine results. The Internet is an amazing tool for writers looking for exposure, so be sure to use it to its full potential.
 
5. Explore different genres. Working outside your usual genre can expand your writing palette and even improve your writing. If you’re working on a full-length novel, for example, you might also consider pitching some article ideas (about something you’re proficient in) to magazines. Not only will you be boosting your publication credits and exhibiting flexibility in your talents, but the things you learn in one genre can nourish your skills in another.
 
6. Exude personal professionalism. Whether you’re submitting query letters or have already secured an agent, it’s crucial that you handle yourself professionally and put forth your best efforts. Wrinkled, stained, misspelled query letters give a bad impression to a potential agent. For those who have agents, return their phone calls promptly, follow their instructions or requests conscientiously, and deliver materials on time. Develop a professional reputation with agents and editors, and remember that you’ll be judged for every piece of writing—this means not firing off a quick e-mail riddled with errors and Internet lingo.
 
7. Finally, stay current. Keep up with publishing trends and market preferences by reading industry magazines, newsletters, and articles. Take courses and seminars whenever possible to brush up on your writing skills, and practice the actual craft of writing at every opportunity.
 
Want help building your reputation as a writer? Writer’s Relief can help you make more submissions! Our clients are widely published and regularly nominated for significant awards. Learn more!
 

Thursday, May 9, 2013

Book Review of Once Upon A Nightmare by Lee Moylan

A book review by Reviews by Lynn




On the night of October thirteenth, the Hunter's Moon descended upon the quiet town of White Chapel. As Sara Bishop drifted off to sleep under its soft illumination, the full moon seemed to have brought with it something far more sinister than a warm glow.

At once, the nightmare started. But this wasn't any ordinary nightmare… This one seemed real ─ as if she could smell it, feel it, taste it. It was one of those dreams ─ one that awakened her witch-like sense ─ a harbinger of heartbreak and now, horror.

Together with Rebecca Parker, the only other person who understood her gift, someone who had experienced her own strange senses, Sara hoped to come to terms with this ominous nightmare. But her closest friend and next door neighbor was no where to be found ─ not since the night of October thirteenth.

And so it begins. With little help from her skeptical husband or local police, Sara finds herself virtually alone as her grisly dreams crawl from the darkness to become a sick and twisted reality ─ a reality where she has become the ultimate desire of a sadistic serial killer.

As images of death, phantoms and shadows surround Sara in this Halloween season, she needs to listen to the whispers in her mind, use her gift, to unmask those around her, for one of them is the man from her nightmare. And he sees her when she's sleeping… He knows when she's awake.

When the next full moon descends upon White Chapel, he will reveal himself to her. And under its silvery glow, a new nightmare will be born. Will Sara Bishop have to experience death itself to stop this killer? Or will her nightmare never end?

Review 6******

I received a copy of this book from the author in return for an honest review.

OMG! This is a fantastic thriller/horror! I LOVED it!

Sara Bishop is a fantastic character. She is feisty, courageous and quite possibly a witch/psychic. When she has a nightmare on the night of October the 13th, little does she know how much her life will change, and that the real nightmare has just begun.

To be honest, I'm not sure where to start. This book took my breath away! I was completely gripped from the first page! I couldn't put it down, and read it in one sitting until the early hours of the morning.


There are several points of view from various characters, which gave a movie type feel to the story. The suspense and threat was palpable, and gave me the chills! The killer is seriously depraved, masochistic and down right creepy! He makes Jack the Ripper and all other serial killers pale in comparison! There are a few red herrings that lead you down certain paths, and has you (as the reader) suspecting everyone. These scenes are very well written. As this is a horror, there are scenes that are extremely disturbing and graphic. I found myself reading these scenes with a mixture of disgust and fascination. I can most definitely say that this book is not for the faint of heart!

When I found out who the killer was, I was completely thrown!

The ending of the book has left chills down my back, and makes me wonder if the author has a second book planned.

Lee Moylan has written a fast paced, down-right scary, horror story that wouldn't let me go! I'm adding this author onto my favourite horror writers list. Due to the extremely disturbing scenes, I do not recommend this book for younger readers. However, if you love fantastic thrillers or horror novels, I very highly recommend this book.

Lee Moylan's Website
Lee Moylan via Amazon
Lee Moylan via Goodreads

Tuesday, April 9, 2013

Designing with Amygdala!


AMYGDALA DESIGN BLOG POST:

About Amygdala Design:

Amygdala Design was officially started in October 2012 by graphic designer Ida Jansson. The company specializes in book covers and book trailers for independent/self-publishing authors. Eye-catching covers at affordable prices are offered to authors in all genres, both fiction and non-fiction.

More info: amygdaladesign.net


 

What makes a book cover eye-catching?

I think all indie-authors can agree to the fact that when it comes to self-publishing, the competition is extremely though. Today, everyone with a computer and access to the internet can publish their own books through services such as CreateSpace. In a matter of seconds, the book can be downloaded to an e-reader such as Kindle all over the world. With all these books floating around the web, how does the reader choose what to read? How do you as an author capture the attention of possible customers in just one glance? Why would they choose your book out of millions of other books in the same genre?

The answer is obvious – you need an eye-catching book cover.  You need a cover that pops out, that screams “read me!”. If you invest in a professional cover, you show your reader that you care about your book, that you are proud of it and that you are willing to invest in it. The reader should be able to tell by your cover that you believe in your book, because if you do then the reader will as well. This is especially true for new writers that have yet to establish their name as an author. Your book can be amazing and well written, but that does not matter if no one reads it. So if you want to convince people that your book is worth their precious time, you should show them that by investing in a quality cover.

So what makes a book cover eye-catching? I design my customers’ book covers from the following three principles: SIMPLE, COLOUR and COMPOSITION. Often, the author comes to me with a specific idea about how they want their covers to look like. They want endless elements and details on their cover, and it is very important to them that all details fit their story. I can understand why they have this request of course; they care greatly about their story! But, remember this; the potential reader browsing Amazon or Goodreads does not care if your hero has red shoes instead of blue or if your cover has 10 different elements from your book. Why? Because they haven`t read the book yet! If you try to fit a whole scene from your book down to the smallest detail on your cover, all the reader will see on your thumbnail is a smear of elements and different colors.

As a rule, the cover should not consist of more than 2 main colors and 2-3 main elements. 1 main object/character and a background with a few complementing but subtle elements is ideal. If an object doesn`t work on the cover – throw it out! Don`t compromise the quality of your cover just to add an element that is important to you. The potential reader won`t care about that one element, they notice the cover as a whole. And that is how you should see your cover as well – as one piece, not a group of different pieces.

When it comes to composition – trust your graphic designer (and make sure to hire one with proper education). There are rules to follow, and you need to know the rules up and down before breaking them. Also, you need to know that your designer has the technical skills to make your cover work. A professional cover has smooth blending and perfect cut image components.

In short: Hire a skilled cover artist, so that you can focus all your attention on your writing!

 

 

Tuesday, April 2, 2013

April through May Schedule!

Alrighty! So I'm almost booked solid throughout the month of May! This is amazing!

Before I get to the schedule for the rest of April and the events already scheduled for May, I want to take a moment to thank the authors and companies who provide services for authors, for their time to spend with The Cavanaugh Connection (and now Eternal Connections).

I'm so glad to know each and every one of you. And I'm glad that we are all working together to make blogging a better place, and to bring these authors and companies into the lives of the readers!

:)

Alright. I'm done with the mushy now! On with the show!

April:

4/4 Sneak peak of The Love Programme by Zanna Mackenzie
4/9 Amygdala Design speaks about bringing books to life with covers and character designs
4/11 Lindsay Avalon unveils Warrior Unleased
4/13 Anthony Price discusses his debut, The House of Wood, on the Saturday Hangout
4/16 Titan Inkorp lays down the law on why their services are top notch on a hobby writer's budget
4/18 See Into the Eyes of the Beholder with Penelope Anne Bartotto
4/20 BEST SELLING AUTHOR Abbi Glines stops by the Saturday Hangout
4/23 Paranormal Books and Curiosities stops by to discuss their book selection process and services
4/25 Samantha Warren spills The Iron Locket
4/27 Penelope Anne Bartatto stops by with an interview!
4/30 **OPEN**

May:

5/2 Fire Burns Hot with Morgan Kelley
5/4 Learn about Glenn Langohr and how he rose up from Underdog
5/7 Learn about Around the Universe blog tour services
5/9 Review TBD
5/11 **OPEN**
5/14 **OPEN**
5/16 Michael Bray will Whisper to you about his latest novel with an excerpt!
5/18 **OPEN**
5/21 **OPEN**
5/23 Rene Folsom discusses her Soul Seers series
5/25 Morgan Kelley relaxes at the Saturday Hangout!
5/28 **OPEN**
5/30 Here Be Monsters by Jamie Sheffield

Sunday, March 17, 2013

How Do You Spell Love? - By Zanna Mackenzie

Helllllo Everyone!
Sorry for the delay! Not really sure what happened. I had it scheduled to post for Thursday, and to me, it looked like it had! Then I realized that it wasn't up! :o

But, alas, our Thirsty Thursday Quencher is here for How do you Spell Love? for your reading pleasure! I want to thank the fabulous Zanna Mackenzie for taking the time to stop by and provide a post!

Thanks!
~K.C.


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Many thanks for hosting me on your blog today!

My novel, published by Crooked Cat, is called How Do You Spell Love? Here’s the details:

Make A Wish…

Kat can’t help wishing there was more to life than this. What happened to her dream job? What happened with Nathan?

Summer is wondering where her life is going too… battling the developers of a controversial housing estate and working out why boyfriend Rob is increasingly distant.

When the developers win the battle and move into town everyone’s life is turned upside down.

Kat meets building site project manager Alex. She enjoys his company far too much, even though he’s on the town’s most hated list.

Summer meets Tom who has plenty of relationship troubles of his own, so things could get really complicated.

Soon everyone is keeping secrets, lives change and hearts are broken. Is everything falling apart, or does life just work in mysterious ways…

There’s a sneak peak of the book below and it can be purchased in paperback and ebook formats now on:

*Amazon UK

http://www.amazon.co.uk/How-Do-You-Spell-Love/dp/1908910771/ref=sr_1_2?ie=UTF8&qid=1361800360&sr=8-2

 

*Amazon USA

http://www.amazon.com/How-Do-You-Spell-Love/dp/1908910771/ref=sr_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1361800417&sr=1-3&keywords=zanna+mackenzie

 

How Do You Spell Love?

Kat pushed the last of the cottage cheese and shrimp sandwiches into the cool box and slammed the van door shut. As if her life wasn’t enough of a disaster zone as it was – no money, lousy job, losing Nathan, having to move back home to live with her parents – now this had to go and happen. Plus, of course, it didn’t help that today she was feeling shattered after spending half the night chanting some ridiculous protection spell in the middle of the allotments with Summer.

Cringing as a van full of builders stopped at the nearby traffic lights, Kat braced herself for the inevitable. After the standard-issue wolf whistles had drifted across from their van, next came the leered, “Wouldn’t argue with that, love!” as one of them nodded towards her sparkling clean van, parked neatly at the curb. The words “A Bit of Crumpet on the Road” emblazoned down the side in deep purple, glittery lettering. Not for the first time Kat cursed her boss Janice for calling her bakery-cum-deli that name.

Kat sighed, well it certainly drew comments from the public and from their customers, not always welcome ones, but as Janice was always keen to point out, any kind of publicity and attention was, in her eyes, good publicity and attention.

Pulling her navy and white striped apron more tightly around her T-shirt and shorts, Kat ignored the builders and climbed into her van to begin that morning’s deliveries. As she indicated to pull out into the busy street in Luisborough, she mulled over the bad news – that she was to add the controversial Netherton Meadows housing development to her daily sandwich round.

Netherton Meadows. Yippee. If Summer found out, she’d surely be ostracised for fraternising with the environmental enemy. This was a development that pretty much everyone in Luisborough had fought against for getting on towards a year. It had been the focus of STW campaigns. It went against everything that Kat believed in environmental-wise. Everyone hated the Netherton Meadows developers. Except, it seemed, Janice, who was perfectly happy to, in her words, ‘supply yummy builders with yummy sandwiches.’

Lost in thought, Kat just managed to spot the approaching traffic lights had turned to red and hastily slammed a foot on the brake. The van lurched to a halt and several boxes of crisps and one of the cool boxes in the back tipped over. Damn. It was shaping up to be one of those days.

Ten minutes later she pulled into the car park of Printing Phenomenon, hauled some baskets and a box from the van and headed for the reception area. It was getting towards late July and was another one of those blazing hot days that made every little thing feel as though it required a huge amount of effort. The kind of day the people of the UK are so unaccustomed to, where all you want to do is get a large, cool drink and collapse into a deckchair for a long snooze.

Two hours later Kat had visited all her usual drops, was extremely hot and bothered, and could put off going to Netherton Meadows no longer.

Driving through the assorted vans, machinery and portacabins Kat parked next to a building marked as being the Site Office and hit the button on the dashboard. Tinkling chimes filled the air as Kat climbed from the driver’s seat and made to open the back doors of the vehicle. It was embarrassing enough that the van had the company name in large lettering along its side but, just to make sure that it received maximum exposure – and achieved maximum embarrassment – Janice had had some irritating chimes fitted to the vehicle too. Kat was under strict instructions to sound the chimes when she called at all of the sites where people came out to the van; such as they were about to at Netherton Meadows.

A man came down the steps of the office with a grin on his face and walked towards her. “Hi, you must be Kat.” He wedged a clipboard under his left arm and offered a hand to shake. “I’m Alex. Project manager for the site.”

“Hi,” mumbled Kat, spotting a group of hard-hat-clad builders advancing towards her with hungry expressions on their faces.

“Right, lads,” Alex turned towards the men. “This is Kat and she’s very kindly agreed to venture onto this site to bring you all your lunch. Don’t give her any hassle, OK?”

The men laughed and then nodded. “Sure, Alex. You’re the boss.”

Fifteen minutes later it seemed that all of the team at the development had made their sandwich, crisp and drink selections and sloped off to devour them in the sunshine. Only one of the builders, a portly man who must have been twenty years Kat’s senior, had pushed the boundaries a little, despite Alex’s earlier warning. As he’d selected a smoked salmon and cream cheese roll – a choice that had surprised Kat somewhat, having pegged him as a ham and cheese kind of guy – he’d asked Kat if she’d fancy joining him for a drink sometime. She’d politely declined his offer, saying that she had a boyfriend. No need to tell him that, technically, she and Nathan were no longer an item. No need to tell him why either.

Just as Kat slammed the van doors shut, Alex re-appeared from his office.

“Thanks, Kat. I hope none of them caused any trouble?” he asked, taking off his yellow hard hat and running a hand through cropped dark brown hair in an agitated fashion.

“No, they were all fine.” Kat forced a smile, struggling to tuck an escaped tendril of curly blond hair back into her ponytail. God, it was hot today. “Thanks for being so gentlemanly about their behaviour.”

He grinned back at her. “No problem. I know what they can be like and as soon as I saw you getting out of the van I thought I’d better intervene. I’ve had enough problems getting a company to even contemplate coming to this site without them scaring you off on the first day.”

“Problems? Why do you think that is?” asked Kat, sensing an opportunity to make sure this man was fully aware just how much the people of Luisborough were still against the development.

“Because they hate us around here,” he said, shrugging matter-of-factly.

“And that doesn’t bother you?” Kat was now leaning against the van, noting that Alex seemed, somehow, a bit different to the rest of the team on the site. He had a jaded air about him despite the fact that he was clearly much younger than most of the others. Kat couldn’t help noticing that he was also extremely good looking.

“Yes, it bothers me but what can you do?” He sighed. “A job’s a job in this day and age. We all have to make a living, don’t we?”

Softening a little towards him, Kat nodded and rolled her eyes. “Tell me about it.”

He moved to stand next to her, propping himself against the van. Kat hadn’t realised until that moment just how tall he was. “Take you, for instance. I can’t imagine it was your lifelong ambition to drive around in a van with that name on the side of it. You must get no end of grief.”

“I do but I need to earn some money to get my life back on track, so here I am.”

“Is this your first job?” he asked, setting his hat and clipboard on the roof of the van and looking at her intently.

“Pretty much. I recently finished a degree in environmental science and geography at university.” She added, trying to sound optimistic, “I’m waiting for my dream job to come along. In the meantime I work at the deli for a pittance and spend the rest of my time volunteering in a charity shop in town.”

“Dream job, eh?” He turned towards her, brown eyes looking at her in a genuinely interested way. “What would your dream job be, then?”

Kat smiled. “That’s easy. I’d love to work on a project like a nature reserve. Helping to preserve the environment, look after the wildlife. The charity shop where I volunteer is the Save the World one. My boss there, Summer, is a good friend and a great campaigner against developments like this.”

Aware that she was telling him things that she hadn’t really spoken to anyone about since Nathan, she quickly turned away. He was a complete stranger. A stranger who stood for everything she was against. He was the enemy, supervising the building of a development that she, and many others, had fought to try to prevent.

Reaching onto the van roof to hand the hat and clipboard back to Alex, she said, “I’d better be going.”

“Sure. Thanks for coming out here.” He started to walk away but then paused, turned back towards her and added, “See you tomorrow, then?”

Kat nodded. As she drove off, she felt more flustered than when she’d arrived. Unfortunately she had a growing suspicion that it had nothing to do with the hot weather or having to bring food to the development against her will. Rather, she suspected, it had much more to do with meeting Alex the site manager. Not a good sign at all.

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Author bio

Zanna Mackenzie lives in the UK with her husband, 4 dogs, an ever expanding library of books waiting to be read, and a vegetable patch that’s home to far too many weeds.

Being a freelance writer and editor of business publications is her ‘day job’, but at every opportunity, she can be found scribbling down notes on scenes for whatever novel she’s working on. She loves it when the characters in her novels take on minds of their own and start deviating from the original plot!

Formerly a travel agent and therapist (she has qualifications in clinical aromatherapy, crystal healing, naturopathic nutrition and herbalism) she loves walking the dogs and gardening – that’s when she’s not writing or reading!

Zanna has written two novels, The Love Programme and How Do You Spell Love.

Find out more about Zanna at:

www.zannamackenzie.blogspot.co.uk

www.zannamackenzie.co.uk

 

Tuesday, March 12, 2013

REAL COPS vs HOLLYWOOD


REAL COPS vs HOLLYWOOD

By Wayne Zurl

2013


Remember the TV series History versus Hollywood that originally aired between 2001 and 2005 on the History Channel? Narrator Burt Reynolds helped you debunk many of the myths perpetuated by filmmakers. I’d like to produce a show called Real Cops versus Hollywood (and some fiction writers.)


I began my police career back on the tail end of the wild and wooly days of law enforcement. Ernesto Miranda wasn’t yet a household word among career felons and Joe Wambaugh (a real cop) had just published his first novel, THE BLUE KNIGHT.


I remember the first burglary I worked with a veteran squad dick everyone called Mr. Ray, a guy willing to take the “new kid” under his wing.


Those were the days before CSI (Las Vegas, Miami, or New York.) Unless we had a homicide, bank robbery, or serial rapist, we did our own forensic work at the crime scene. We took photographs, dusted for prints, and other almost pre-historic things available to an investigator at the time.


Okay, back to my house burglary. It took me only ten minutes to establish that the break-in had been staged, for insurance purposes I assumed. The pry marks on the sliding glass door matched exactly to a sixteen ounce straight claw hammer hanging above the homeowner’s workbench. The dresser drawers were searched from top to bottom—something a good burglar never does. And the broken glass had been scattered too much. I called Mr. Ray aside and told him what I thought. He asked only one question. “Are you sure?” I nodded. His next move: He tossed the homeowner out a second floor bedroom window. His next statement: “Okay, kid, go ask that son-of-a-bitch if he wants to reconsider his complaint. Wild and wooly, not an investigative technique you should practice unless you want the Internal Affairs Bureau to have your desk phone on speed dial. So, what’s my point? Hell, I don’t know. I wanted to capture your attention.


But here’s a valid point regarding crime scene investigators—many of whom today are civilians. Now, read my lips. CSIs do not investigate crimes. They provide technical assistance to squad detectives who canvas neighborhoods looking for witnesses, check pawn shops, contact informants, interrogate suspects, and then (and only then) when they have reasonable cause to believe a certain someone committed a crime, they arrest the perpetrator—or poipuhtratah in Nu Yawk.


It’s just not logistically feasible for CSIs to “work” a case plus do all the horribly technical things they do at a crime scene and later at their office or lab and continue on until a case is cleared by arrest. Regardless of what TV tells us, it’s not possible.


I just mentioned reasonable cause to believe—sometimes called probable cause to believe—the standard of proof needed to make a lawful arrest or obtain a search warrant.


When I worked as a cop, I rarely watched TV police shows because the technicalities were so wrong I thought my head would explode. After I retired, that changed. For old time’s sake, I watched Law & Order. I loved NYPD Blue. And I even gave a few private eyes house room.


Let’s analyze Law & Order for a few minutes. Quite often, to build tension I suppose or to create illegitimate conflict perhaps (things people think are necessary in fiction) the boys and girls of the 27th Squad would jump the gun and arrest their suspect before they had all their ducks in a row. D/Lt. Van Buren would complain, “1 PP (#1 Police Plaza—the address of NYPD headquarters) is breathing down my neck. Go out and get a clearance.”  With that admonition, Detectives Lenny Briscoe and Ed Green would break into a board meeting or doctor’s office and lock up their prime suspect—perhaps with only a reasonable suspicion—close but no cigar in laws of arrest.


Later, Chief Assistant District Attorney Jack McCoy would lose a crucial piece of evidence at a pre-trial hearing or fail to get an indictment at grand jury. He’d then send one of his lovely assistant’s out on the street to backtrack and build a case the squad dicks should have tightened up prior to slapping on the cuffs.


Law & Order was a great show that ran for twenty years, but if a real detective made that many mistakes, he/she would end up walking a foot post in a very quiet neighborhood.


Hollywood also seems bent on misleading the public on the process of obtaining search warrants. When you know a suspect won’t voluntarily allow you to peek into their dwelling, vehicle, or workplace to obtain evidence or lock down the possibility that the items you seize won’t be questioned at a hearing, you should go in armed with a warrant. To get one, you don’t simply call the boss and say, “Have the day man (whomever he or she may be) get us a warrant to search…….(Where ever you want to look.)


The 4th Amendment grants an individual protection against unreasonable search and seizure. There are exceptions to the basic rule, but this isn’t a law class and to keep me from rambling on too long, let’s agree you have the time and the best way to get a good search is to have a judge approve your warrant application by agreeing that you have good reason to believe you may find material evidence in the place you wish to look.


In my experience, the detective working the case applies for the warrant because he/she can best explain the reasonable cause to believe they have established.


One thing Hollywood gets right about search warrant applications—some judges are more pro-cop than others. Every detective has their favorite judge and may use them if they want a quick signature. But you don’t build a world-class conviction rate by using warrants that can be easily contested, resulting in lost evidence after a hearing. A good police supervisor should insure that warrant applications meet the burden of proof.


Another pet peeve of mine involves how Hollywood police supervisors never prep their cops before post-shooting press conferences. Invariably, some nit-wit reporter will ask, “Did you shoot to kill or shoot to wound?”


If you want to add a tidbit of reality to your book or story, there is only one way for your sharp cop to respond. “I shot to prevent or terminate (strike out the time frame which does not apply) the suspect’s illegal conduct.


As cops, we’re not gunslingers who don’t care if we bring’em in dead or alive and we’re not trained to shoot the gun out of a bad guy’s hand. Leave that to the heroes of those old B western movies. Police officers are trained to shoot for the largest target they can acquire—generally the criminal’s torso. Even with annual weapons qualification, many officers are not extremely good with a handgun much less distinguished experts. So, in the heat of a gunfight, all cops should make things as simple as possible and aim at the big picture.


But prior to taking that shot—using deadly physical force—the cop has to meet certain criteria. Hollywood sometimes fails to grasp this. I used to teach the law of justification in the use of force and I’d need lots more space to cover it adequately. If you plan on centering your fiction on a police shooting and you want to get the technicalities correct, some serious research is necessary to help you maintain credibility as a writer. Very basically, police officers may not use deadly physical force to prevent or terminate crimes against property. You can’t whack a kid to keep him from stealing hubcaps. If you, acting as a PO, reasonably believe it’s necessary to prevent or terminate crimes against a person, things like murder, a certain form of manslaughter, robbery (that means forcible stealing,) forcible sex crimes (rape or sodomy) or assaults that may result in serious physical injury, you may use deadly physical force—which is not limited to shooting. This is a complicated topic where generally cops have more latitude than civilians.


When I began writing fiction, I wanted cops, ex-cops, and serious fans of a police procedural to say, “This guy has gotten the details right.” No one writes without, at sometime, tacitly asking his reader for a little suspension of disbelief. But if you get those all important technicalities correct you can, with good conscience, stretch a fan’s S.O.D at an important time and in the interest of a good story.


If you’re writing about a sharp cop, have him or her get the little things right. They can make mistakes to build tension and cause your readers to grit their teeth, but don’t let them put a bloody blouse in a sealed plastic bag unless you want them to botch up an investigation.

Sunday, March 10, 2013

Waking the Phoenix by Lindsay Avalon!



Welcome to the official cover reveal of Waking the Phoenix, book 2 in the Mythrian Realm series! Waking the Phoenix is the highly anticipated follow up to Breaking the Nexus, which released on 12/12/12. While there is no official release date set, Waking the Phoenix will be out early this summer!

In the meantime, I will be releasing Warrior Unleashed, a novella featuring Sha’s half brother, a panther Chimerae (shifter) named Achaius. Be sure to look for that this April!

Without further ado, I present the gorgeous cover designed by Blue Harvest Creative



Blurb:

As the Nexus continues to break down, evil threatens the Mythrian and Human Realms. Millennia ago, only the sacrifice of the Great Phoenix was enough to imprison Ferren, a blood mage with the power to destroy the Human Realm. When the Nexus falls, his prison will shatter and he will be free to walk the earth once more, leaving a path of destruction in his wake.

Chaos engulfs the Mythrian and Human Realms as Ferren fights to escape his prison. Connor and Sha must race against time to find the last of the phoenixes before all is lost. There’s just one problem: the phoenixes have lain dormant for thousands of years. Can they stay alive long enough to save their world?

The key to saving the Realms lies in waking the phoenix.


Don’t miss the first book, Breaking the Nexus, available now on Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and in paperback!

Breaking the Nexus will be on SALE for $2.99 March 8-11 only!





Blurb:
A warrior trying to save humans. A detective searching for a killer. And a powerful romance neither expected.

Throughout history, myths and legends of extraordinary creatures have been told and retold. Fantastic tales of demons and banshees, gryphons and dragons, and of course, magic. Stories that every child grows to learn are nothing more than fantasy…or are they?

Beyond the world you see lies a hidden realm, the Mythrian Realm, inhabited by all of the creatures you’ve been told are mere fiction. Only one thing lies between humans and the truth: the Nexus. A magical barrier erected millennia ago to separate the two realms, it has stood the test of time. Until now.

For Mythrian Sha Phoenix, magic is nothing new. But when she stumbles upon a portal on the verge of collapse, her fate will forever change. Pulled through the portal into the Human Realm, she lands in the middle of Detective Connor Flynn’s brutal murder scene. Soon it is obvious someone is using blood magic to try to bring down the Nexus. Together, Connor and Sha must work to unravel the secrets before the barrier falls and the realms collide.

The Nexus is breaking and all hell is about to unleash…literally.

Buy it now:
·         Autographed Copy: http://lindsayavalon.blogspot.com/p/buy-my-books.html


Meet Lindsay Avalon!
I am a wife, a programmer, and now an author. I have an adorable mini Schnauzer and more books than I have room for. I love reading romance because no matter what may be happening in my life, I can always count on my books to end happily ever after. The day I met my husband was the day I truly began believing in happily ever after. After hearing me complain a few too many times that I had “nothing” to read despite the hundreds of paperbacks scattered around the house, my husband began suggesting I write my own stories. When I finally took his advice I discovered that although I enjoy my day job as a software engineer, my true calling is to be an author.
My sister drilled into me an appreciation for fantasy and mythology, something I try to bring to my books. My debut novel, Breaking the Nexus started as a book written for NaNoWriMo and has grown to so much more. It was the conduit that introduced me to a fantastic group of independent authors who have changed my life in unimaginable ways.
When I’m not writing, I’ve found a passion for blogging and interviewing fellow authors. I also love reading, baking, crochet, sewing sock monkeys, playing video games, and all sorts of random crafts. I have an incurable love of rubber duckies and stuffed animals, and I believe nobody should have to grow up if they don’t want.



Connect with me:
·         Blog: http://lindsayavalon.blogspot.com
·         Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/author.lindsay.avalon
·         Twitter: @LindsayAvalon
·         Goodreads: http://www.goodreads.com/author/show/6568822.Lindsay_Avalon

Tuesday, March 5, 2013

Guest Bloggers

The Cavanaugh Connection is currently seeking guest bloggers!
Topics Include:
    • Author Interviews
    • Reviews (Anything from a short to a novel - no erotica please! Yes, you can submit a review for your own book!!)
    • Articles about publishing
    • Articles about writing
    • Articles about books (Even your own!)
    • If you believe you have a relevant topic not listed, just ask!

I'm looking for there a week. Each week there would be an article, interview, and review (ideally).

If you are interested, just reply to this post or send a message to cavanaugh.kc@gmail.com.

Posts will be on a first-come-first-serve basis. However, there is no limit on how many posts you may contribute, but all posts will be scheduled with me ahead of time. This being said, if people are interested in submitting multiple posts, they may be spread out across time, and not all appear back-to-back so to be fair to others looking to have posts put up!

Thanks!
~K.C.